My script

 First draft 

  

This is the first draft of my script. I have written the script in 3 distinct parts. The introduction, main body/ interview section and the ending. I wanted to express the narrative of the host, Christian Goodman to gradually become more understanding of skateboarding and become more tolerant. I figured this would be an interesting and entertaining character development for the audience to watch. To do this, i painted the character of Christian Goodman in the introduction as closed minded and inconsiderate. In the interview/main body of the documentary, the character opens up a little bit and becomes more interested, then towards the end of the video, he admits he was wrong and becomes more open minded and tolerant. 

final script

Narrator

Skateboarding... some would say a harmless pastime, that thing the glue sniffer on the bus said he used to do or that thing your dad said you should try because you have no friends.

But what if I told you under the sticky, smelly exterior is an evil underworld cult in our very own back yard, devil worshipping heathens that inhabit our once peaceful land, damaging our concrete and what not.

My name is Christian Goodman, and over the next few minutes I will be taking you on a journey to uncover what I have exposed about the hidden evil that roams our very streets

about this mysterious group. But i have to warn you. It is not for the faint of heart.

This is Kyle, Kyle Noble. Don't let his charming persona and gorgeous blonde locks fool you, He is an evil spirit and from what i gather is a ruthless villain who would destroy anything in the way to get to the nearest bus stop roof. Ill let this speak for itself. Truly terrifying individual. I would stay clear at all costs.

Kacper Barwinski. Barwinski is from a savage far away land called Ploband … no, Bolan, no..., Polon. No, Poland. Legend has it he harnesses his evil powers through a secret third eye in his forehead. He uses these powers for evil and chaos, and to manipulate the board into doing his bidding such as carrying him down stairs and drops of alarming heights. The board is an innocent victim of all this, may god have mercy on his soul

Jay laws is a master sourcer. Contantly using mind powered manipulation to balance himself on 2 wheels. the though of getting in his way while doing he calls a 'manual' is a fate id rather not bare. With his superhuman strength he is able to snap a skateboard with just the lightest tap of a foot, and has no concern for the trees who were sacrificed for his evil doings.

Jake withers. Withers is often found on the sidelines, scouting his next peculiar combo, but when he's not, he is usually roaming a local tavern used by his fellow satanic minions called 'the Weatherspoon's beer garden' primitive if you ask me.

Lastly, but certainly not least, oh by a longshot, is David... Bell. Even the name makes me sick to my stomach with rage. The type of range that can only be matched by stubbing your toe on a crisp, oak table, at 11:57 on a Thursday night. His bald head is where he stores his deepest and darkest evil powers, unbenownced to civilised man hence why it is often left covered by a hat, to conceal the evil below. He is keen on destroying the fabric of society and enjoys partaking in the occasional destruction of public property. If I have any advice, it would be steer.... clear.

However dark and evil these people may be, there may just be a bigger threat to civilisaton on our hands. No matter the time of day, or the day of the week, the streets of Sunderland are prone to a threat like no other. And, to my dismay, the skateboarders may be the only group strong enough to keep it away. Im talking of course about the hundreds of drug users that inhabit the Sunniside area. I know what you're thinking, how can these undeniably evil people be of any use to us in society, well let me tell you that if theres one thing skateboarders hate more than the fabric of civilised society and distrubing public peace, it is people who stop them from doing so. I once spoke to a local business owner on my travels about this and they admitted that when the skateboarders were around, the drug users would often remain docile and vigilant. Could this be the key to stopping them? maybe so, only time can tell.

On this journey i have learned a lot about these folk. Most importantly, that they maybe aren't as evil and devil worshiping as i once thought and maybe deep deep down underneath the surface of the surface, hidden in a little black bag in a locked box, they aren't all that bad. The least i can say is that they have found a little sense of community in this crazy world, the same i have found in Scientolo- Christianity, yeah, Christianity.

Thank you all for coming on this daring journey with me, i hope you too learned a bit about these people, although this adventure has scared me at times, but i am proud to say i have over come my fear, i am still scared, but less scared than i was 10 minutes ago. I have been your host, Christian Goodman, thank you and goodnight.

This is the completed version of my script. After filming several interview scenes i did not like how the interview style format worked into the video. Also, the audio and video was not good quality therefore i did not want to use it. I opted for a different approach to the documentary where i ran through different ones of my friends, each getting their own description while also making jokes along the way.